We would like to see you add more detail to your understanding of the character's origin and history.
We would also like to see you redo how you will adapt him into the reborn timeline section and include more specific details about how you will fit them into the lore instead of talking about...
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Since you haven't updated it going to go ahead and deny this you are more than welcome to reapply with the suggestions Ronnie gave you if you so choose.